Okay. Things have gotten more intense I see, and from the look of things, I'm gonna have to stay tuned to find out what's going on. You're doing a great job ending these segments and making the reader want more, which is a huge element to storytelling. The style you've chosen for these is really working. Short and mysterious definitely makes this segment stand out, although the others are similar in their length and intrigue.

I sit here wondering why this old guy is so blunt and crazy. If that's the idea, which I assume it is, you're doing a good job so far. Hope to read more soon.