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Bankai Name: Chūsei no Idaina Rensa Shi Seishin (Great, Chained Spirit of Fealty)

Bankai Appearance: In actual combat, Captain-Commander Tsuribakki, the Bound Titan, has only resorted to the use of his Bankai form a handful of times--never in Soul Society, and always with the express, unanimous permission of Central 46. When training, he secludes himself in a pocket of space-time hollowed out in the Dangai where his abilities can do no damage to any mortal bystanders. This incredibly dangerous and difficult method of self-cultivation is only made possible by his vast amount of spiritual pressure, which allows him to survive in the unforgiving realm without becoming trapped by the countless defenses the Dangai employs. Even then, Tsuribakki can only keep up a dual-pace of Bankai and spiritual control for six thousand hours--roughly three hours in normal time--before he has to seal his Zanpakutō and return to Soul Society.

The transformation from Shikai to Bankai is signified by a momentous, symbolic action; Tsuribakki, in all of his power and prestige, kneels to the ground and lifts his bound hands up in front of his face in a style identical to some western forms of prayer. This humbling moment shows a level of loyalty that few would have expected from the Captain-Commander back during his times as the Kenpachi,. With a booming voice kept tender by the mutual respect that binds Shinigami and Zanpakutō, he simply states:

"Bankai. Chūsei no Idaina Rensa Shi Seishin."

The power released upon the utterance of those words is astounding. White energy flows outwards in all directions--a tidal wave that could sweep away an army of Lieutenant-class soldiers in an instant of brilliance and awe. Captain-class combatants who have not entered a similar state of release find themselves at the risk of being torn into nothingness by the pushing and pulling forces inherent to the Steel-Bringer's Reiatsu, a trait only made more imposing by the fully manifested, true form of his Zanpakutō.

The six chains of Chūsei's Shikai form extend into the ground, much like during the Inori: Kyūdō. Unlike that prayer, however, the amount of chains that rupture forth from the ground is far greater than a measly dozen or two; instead, thousands burst free and spiral into the sky in a dance of shifting steel. These new chains vary in proportion on a far grander scale than those produced during Shikai, with some being as wide as fifty feet and several miles long. The actual numbers, shapes, and properties of the chains is almost impossible to determine due to their speed and quantity.

Tsuribakki's form is almost immediately wrapped within the eye of the metal storm. Although the sea of chains never stops moving for an instant, it does fall back towards the ground, and when the Captain-Commander is revealed from behind his steel shroud his upper body is completely encased in what looks like a segmented iron maiden. The head of the device, which is the Bankai form of his Zanpakutō, has an eagle motif that hints at the true nature of the weapon's spirit, backed by a metal crest that insinuates royalty. The eyes of this statuesque feature are as solid and metal as the rest of it, but a white glow within the sockets hints at the fact that sight is retained despite this complete covering.

Tsuribakki's arms continue to be bound in this final form, although they are now wrapped tight across his midsection, limiting the movement of his upper body entirely and keeping him trapped within the metal shell. This completely eliminates all forms of Hakuda that rely on upper-body manipulation. His legs remain uninhibited, however, and such is the reason why the strongest of his techniques, particularly the Hibiwarekeru, rely on the open function of his lower body instead of his torso and arms.

Bankai Abilities:

Indestructible Form: Like its Shikai form, Chūsei no Idaina Rensa Shi Seishin is completely indestructible, allowing Tsuribakki's entire upper body to remain impervious to damage from even the strongest of sources. While this does not make him immortal--enough wear on his spiritual energy or damage to his lower body can still be fatal--it functions in a way that turns him into a defensive battering ram of unspeakable utility. Cataclysmic abilities that can affect him from the bottom up are more than capable of infiltrating the iron maiden and harming him, despite his isolation within his steel encasement. Likewise, these defensive capabilities do not stop mental assaults, although Tsuribakki's own willpower is more than often as impenetrable as his Zanpakutō and just as unforgiving. Although he is no longer capable of producing chains from the areas of wrapped metal near his elbows, any set of links directly attached to these particular zones are as impervious to damage as the rest of his upper body.

Sensory Isolation: While Tsuribakki's head may be completely encased in the iron maiden of his Bankai form, he is in no way limited in regards to the primary senses; in fact, one is remarkably improved. Like the eagle, his visual capabilities skyrocket to the point where he can see hundreds of feet further than normal vision permits--with a clarity so crisp that it borders on perfection. This, like all of his senses, functions through an outstretched awareness that funnels through his Reiatsu. The white glow in the eyes of the eagle motif is an example of the appearance of this feature, although his sense of hearing and smell--touch and taste are still stifled--don't have similar markings. Breathing is also replaced by this Reiatsu-utility, making gaseous poisons useless against his Bankai, although skin-contact and injected applications can still be used upon his open legs. This allows Tsuribakki to exist in the harshest of conditions, increasing his survivability to another astounding plateau.

Shin no Kenshin no Inori: Muteikō (Prayer of Whole-Hearted Devotion: Passivity): The signature ability of Harotaissen Tsuribakki's Zanpakutō and the reason Central 46 must unanimously approve his combat release, the Shin no Kenshin no Inori: Muteikō is a constantly active prayer that he has no direct control over. The massive ocean of writing, constricting, and incredibly durable chains that appear during the activation of his Bankai are finely attuned to Reiryoku and spiritrons (the particles that make up spiritual beings like Shinigami, Pluses, and Hollow). Without the mental command of their master, these chains actively search for and obliterate anything and everything that has even the slightest trace of either of these elements, barring the Captain-Commander himself. Unfortunately, all living things have a level of Reiryoku, even if it is negligible, making collateral damage almost impossible to avoid once the chains have been set loose. What is worse is that, in Soul Society, where everything is composed of spiritrons, nothing is safe or sacred outside of Sekkisekki stone. Should Tsuribakki ever release Bankai within the walls of the Seireitei, the likely result would see the entire Shinigami fortress crushed, torn, and broken as the sea of chains drowned the buildings in a current of shifting metal.

Shin no Kenshin no Inori: Satori (Prayer of Whole-Hearted Devotion: Enlightenment): Despite the release into Bankai and the incredible spike of Reiatsu that accompanies it, Tsuribakki is still too large to effectively benefit from the potential boost in Hohō that comes with such quantities of spiritual energy. This prayer helps negate that particular downfall. By seemingly sinking into--or walking into, if an up-welling is nearby--the shifting chains, he can actually "chain-walk" or "teleport" to any other location within the physical reach of the Shin no Kenshin no Inori: Muteikō, allowing him to traverse distances instantly without leaving the protection of said ability. The movement is almost instantaneous, but the quickest individuals are still able to predict the movement and even outpace it since his entire body must be enveloped before he can begin to appear anywhere else. Although this window is quite small, it still exists, and that is often enough for such masters. Still, the incredible mobility allowed by this prayer more than makes up for the lack of maneuverability that the Bound Titan normally suffers.

Shin no Kenshin no Inori: Chie (Prayer of Whole-Hearted Devotion: Wisdom): This prayer makes use of the teleportation properties of the Shin no Kenshin no Inori: Ashinritsumei to bolster the velocity of a traumatic, devastating headbutt. By launching himself into the sea of chains head-first, Tsuribakki can reappear wherever he likes, continuing his movement without losing momentum. While this kind of headbutt can be enough to smash through city blocks with just one pass through the chains, he can make it far more powerful by continuing on a progressive loop that increases his speed exponentially. Once terminal velocity is reached--with the additional backing of his spiritual energy and leg strength--the flying headbutt can become so powerful that it can cut a canyon into a mountain-range, severely altering the terrain of wherever the prayer is used. While the indestructible surface of his iron maiden shell protects his torso and head from the damage of impact, Tsuribakki must be careful not to let his legs become injured during the technique; despite his strength and durability, the simple force of such a collision could snap his leg in half like a twig.

Shin no Kenshin no Inori: Danketsu (Prayer of Whole-Hearted Devotion: Unity): The ultimate prayer that truly combines the personalities of Tsuribakki and his Zanpakutō, the Shin no Kenshin no Inori: Danketsu cannot be used in either Soul Society or the Human world by the orders of the Spirit King itself, making it the only ability in the history of the Shinigami to warrant such an extreme mandate. By channeling a massive amount of his Reiatsu--a drain that would kill most Captain-class Shinigami--into the chains that surround his Bankai form, Tsuribakki can cause a large portion of them to swell and rise into the sky like a mountain. This incredibly imposing foreshadowing can take up a diameter of nearly two miles and a height four times as large, but the eeriness comes from the calm serenity of the chains, which seem to hum as they cease their assault on their surroundings. The features of an eagle appear within the pile as if Chūsei's spirit itself were trying to burst free into the physical world, which is not too far from the truth--this technique is the ultimate culmination of its abilities. With the opening of its chain beak and a fierce shriek that can split apart the skies, the giant eagle lets loose a cataclysmic beam of white energy in whatever direction Tsuribakki mentally communicates. This two hundred foot wide stream of energy can pierce through the Earth from end to end or blast a hole through the core of the Moon, easily causing extinction-level events or killing whatever happens to be in its way. So powerful is this attack that the Captain-Commander only learned of it within the past century, and to use it means to bring devastation not only to a realm, but to himself, as the energy taken to perform it is more than even he can handle without serious injury.
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This is part 3 of Harotaissen Tsuribakki's sheet, which contains Bankai information about the character.

Part 1, which contains general information about the character, can be found here.

Part 2, which contains information about his Zanpakutō and Shikai, can be found here.

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This reference sheet represents the Captain-Commander of my non-canon Bleach world. While he may seem overpowered, this particular description is not the one I use in roleplay--the power scales represented in its text are only in relation to the personal stories and the fiction which I write. When roleplaying, I use altered sheets with abilities to scale with the setting, completely devoid of power comparisons.

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mzhamma Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I am always in awe of your profiles. They are a true work of genius.

I just have one question: how did you make the titles for you Zanpakuto? I mean, their Japanese names; I've been trying to find a site for just such a thing but I am having trouble locating a decent one.
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NexusYuber Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you for the compliment! o.0 XD

I actually make the titles through a very, very small knowledge of Japanese grammar and liberal use of Google translate. I just make sure to use the non-anglicized versions of the words by clicking on the symbols until they aren't romaji.
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mzhamma Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Awesome! Thanks for the help, man.

You know, I wasn't really sure if I should ask this...but would you be willing to drop my profile and read some of Bleach original character profiles--if you have the time, that is...
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NexusYuber Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Throw me a link!
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mzhamma Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Uh, sure; here you go:

mzhamma.deviantart.com/gallery…

Thanks for doing this by the way, I really appreciate it... :)
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NexusYuber Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Whoops! I meant a specific piece. I'm unfortunately stupidly swamped with junk right now, so I'd love to focus my attention on one that you want me to read the most. I wish I could read them all, though. ;-;
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mzhamma Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I'll leave that up to you; you can read one profile now and view the others when and if you have the time, okay?
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NexusYuber Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Sounds good to me!
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Myennaius13 Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013
Okay, now that I've given thought to my own Captain-Commander, I fully understand this guy's exceedingly dangerous powers, and even approve of how apocalyptic they can clearly so easily be. As for a full out fight, which would only be safe inside the Dengai world, I think it could go both ways, considering that my guy's powers center around the idea of wielding the cosmos (specifically the life of stars). Tsuribakki's massively destructive chains against the full power of my guy, that being to turn his body into a sort of black hole itself, would make for a battle so awesome that I think it would actually turn out to be a bit terrifying.
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Myennaius13 Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2012
Okay, now I have no issue with this Bonkai, given the power of Yamamotto's. The only way to fight and have a prayer (no pun intended) against this guy as I see it would be to be willing to destroy a realm along with the enemy. As for the last technique, I understand the outstanding mandate, since my OC has something that he's bared from using. Basically, when that ability is pushed to its limit (it has a good chance of killing him if he goes that far) it could render the majority of something as large as Los Noches to rubble. So a city like Soul Society or most cities in the human world would just be a large hole in the ground afterwards. This is only because he has an obscenely large natural store of energy, but he chooses to never use such attacks for the same reason that Central 46 has deemed them forbidden.
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NexusYuber Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm glad that you like the ability! The reason he has lasted so long in his position is because, as you said, it seems pretty much impossible to take this guy down.
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Myennaius13 Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2012
You're welcome, and the only way I can see my guy possibly beating him is due to the infectious nature of his zanpakuto. Of course, I'm talking about doing enough damage this your OC's legs, but I'm sure he's well adapted enough to defending his only open weakness in battle.
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NexusYuber Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
He generally has the chains wrapped up around his legs, but it's definitely possible to get to him if you're strong enough to fight through them.
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King-of-Silence Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
him versus a zero division captain... what about that situation?
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Myennaius13 Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2012
Great, which just means an unknown multitude of years with the fourth division after dealing with this guy.
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Amor13 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Would it be possible for Murakami Akio to be unaffected by Tsuribakki's Kigan no Seishinseii: Shoukyokusei, since Aiko doesn't emit any spiritual energy?
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NexusYuber Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
That's something you'll have to find out from the fiction pieces, you clever rogue.
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Amor13 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Oh so he can survive it.
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Amor13 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
I know that the chances are as slim as another Tsuribakki being born in many millenniums, but is there anyone in Section 66 that would be perfectly capable of making him activate his Bankai and using his Kigan no Seishinseii: Kessoku technique (and don't worry I'm not forgetting about Barracuda although we haven't read about his SE yet)
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NexusYuber Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I won't reveal the upper limits of their powers. :P

I LEAVE THIS QUESTION UNANSWERED!
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laughy123 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2012
After reading this guys sheet again i feel bad for the humans that associate with Section 66:P This guy is so powerful that the soul king himself made a rule about not using his
Kigan no Seishinseii: Kessoku, scary scary man.I do not see this guy dying/being replaced anytime soon.
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NexusYuber Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Tsuribakki is going to be a particular challenge that they'll need to overcome. Barracuda, too.
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laughy123 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2012
Oh wow i forgot about Barracuda lol yea these guys got their hands full.
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NexusYuber Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
It will be a fun fiction to read, I hope. All of these questions will be answered.
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laughy123 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2012
It will be awesome i'm positive of it well as long as you don't follow kubos footsteps but from what i have read from you i have no worries :la:
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NexusYuber Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I will avoid pulling Kubo nonsense whenever possible. Characters WILL die and they WILL use their powers and they WILL learn lessons.
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laughy123 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2012
Good to hear.My only complaint with kubo really is that no good guy dies and so many captains have yet to use Bankai now that i don't want them to die because i want to see their abilities so kubo eh he put me in a tough spot.On one hand i want deaths of characters on the other i don't want these characters to die without showing off their full strength.
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NexusYuber Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
My biggest complaint has always been the lack of logic. For a military organization whose sole purpose it to protect the balance of life and death, the Gotei 13 does a tremendous job of NOT DOING ANYTHING TO HELP.
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C-M-Soul Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2012
I take it back his bankai is the most terrifying thing I've ever seen! The appearance is absolutely astounding the person you commissioned to draw this is incredibly skilled and fits the description perfectly!
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NexusYuber Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Geoff was the commissioned artist.

And thank you! As the Captain-Commander, I purposefully made him blisteringly overpowered far beyond what would be acceptable for any RP.
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C-M-Soul Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2012
Quick question where do you get your translations from?
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NexusYuber Featured By Owner Feb 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
It depends on the language, to be honest.

[link]
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C-M-Soul Featured By Owner Feb 29, 2012
Oh I see thanks for the link. Sorry I haven't had the chance to check out the rest of your characters yet been kinda busy lately.
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NexusYuber Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
No worries! I appreciate every look that they get!
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Wanzer21 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Alright now that I have nothing standing in my way, review time.

Appearance: It's really hard to do appearance wrong, but its also really hard to do perfectly as well. Tsuribakki's appearance was amazing, in that it completely described every aspect of the male to a degree that painted an amazing picture to anyone reading the profile. It's clear that you know what you're doing when it comes to that; however, the opening paragraph seemed a little bit out of place, like it belonged in a history section, an introduction or maybe as part of the personality. Beyond that, you use a float of good analogies that present clear images to the viewer reading. These are particularly useful in breaking up the monotony of analyzing an appearance; so you've got a lock down on the ideas of appearance and present it in such a way that makes it enjoyable to read over.

Personality: This was really the only disappointment I had reading over your entire profile. It reads like a history section and doesn't give me any feel for the character, more it tells me that he was originally arrogant and self-centered and now he considers his actions on a whole about the Seireitei. There is much more to any character's personality besides their ego and their seeking of wisdom. A great deal could be elaborated on here, particularly how his monk like demeanor has changed him, his eating habits, how he interacts with his men, demeanor in training, demeanor in real combat, demeanor when being beaten, his interpretations of the various races, etc. etc. This is just my personal opinion as well, but the personality section, baring a comprehensive history, should be the longest section of your profile, right now...you showed how he changed and created sort of a flat, stoic male. For someone who is supposed to be Captain Commander, I would expect a lot more personality from them. While I'm not saying the monk aspect is not an interesting ideal, it also fits with the Captain Commander visage well as they can constantly keep their cool, you don't want that to be what literally defines every aspect of their life. If you do that, it seems more like presenting a archetypal character for no real reason.

Abilities Section: Ok, I just started doing these myself, but reading over your character sheet right now, I am gathering that Tsuribakki's shunpo is his weakest area; however, even that is startling when compared to a Vice-Captain or even some of the Captains. This presents a case where we have a character with no real weakness, even without his zanpakuto activated. Several of his abilities have considerable power already, particularly his zanjutsu ability which is little more than a Getsuga Tenshou without the need of releasing his weapon. While its perfectly fine when going about the idea of producing a blast of wind or straight concussive force through a vacuum effect from the strength and speed that the blade is thrown since this has been done before without an necessity of reiatsu as proved by Kenpachi and various others, the addition of his reiatsu along with the sudden burst of a white reiatsu that could travel for city blocks just put it a little bit over the edge.

The hakuda as well is an extremely interesting section and it shows a great deal of thought; however, I'm having the same problems that I had with the zanjutsu section, its making him a living breathing weapon of mass destruction. While the each of the ideas are interesting in their own right and illustrate the pure destructive power of the Captain Commander, something I find should be particularly overwhelming...we've gotten to the point where the character really isn't a character anymore, but more a plot device that's never going to be beaten in combat, by anything. The only chance I can see for any character fighting him to possibly win, is to beat him to death before he could pull out his shikai, or heaven forbid his bankai. Him having Shunko is alright, but the Curious Links of the Golden Chain just seems to be utter overkill. There is so much here that even regarding some time and energy being put in, the character literally is a 'God' and I'd put him up there with Aizen and Mugetsu Ichigo when it comes to just utter overpowered nature. I'm sorry for this statement, because I really love the character and most of the work you do, but...just...this would one of the things if I was reading a serialized manga or story line with these characters...I would hate this one. He's just literally too powerful for his own good and whenever he stepped onto the battlefield you knew he was going to win, so you'd have that nagging itch at the back of your head when reading going: "All of this could be solved so quickly if Tsuribakki would just get off his ass." or "Why doesn't Tsuribakki do something?" Bleach made the same mistake with Yamamoto, Shunsei and Orihime, their abilities all made them basically gods whom could do whatever they wanted to, so many of the problems that continually present themselves in bleach come down to: Orihime being too much of a puss to do anything, Yamamoto being too much of an old fart and Shunsei being too lazy.

Alright rant is over there. I loved the ideas, just too much is packed into one character and he wouldn't be fun to read about. His shikai and Bankai only add to this fact, especially the part about it being invulnerable. Though the question with that is if the metal becomes super-heated or water manages to get inside of it, would Tsuribakki feel the heat or drown?
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NexusYuber Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Alrighty! Here we go!

Appearance: I absolutely agree that a large portion of his history is shoved into the appearance; that's my style and I doubt I'm willing or able to change it. I do it in every major edit that I've produced thus far and I'm likely going to continue to do it in order to get people off on the right foot about the character. Since I don't ever want to put a full history section into any one of my profiles--I'm saving bulk lore for actual pieces of fiction--I shove it into the appearance because the two are almost always correlated. Without explaining part of his history, the fact that Tsuribakki is a mammoth would be a curiosity, not a part of his being.

Personality: Unfortunately, I tend to play most of the finite bits of personality out in roleplay and through stories, not in the profiles themselves. I like to give a general overview, since personality is not a simple thing to explain and is the basis of each of my characters. What I gave in this section is his motivation and the history of his personality. And no, he doesn't have the biggest or most interesting personality out of my characters, but I wouldn't want him to, nor did I design him to. He is what he is; an embodiment of his position. It's difficult for me to imagine the most powerful Shinigami in active Soul Society being anything but a monument to where they stand and the chair they sit in, so I designed him to do just that.

Abilities: I'm disappointed, unfortunately, that I have to justify his ridiculous power again, since I've done it so many times. I truly, truly understand your concerns and where you're coming from, but I knew all of this when I made Tsuribakki and deliberately planned him to be this way. I'm actually glad that you didn't once mention him being too overpowered for roleplay, since that was never an option for him, but within the storyline that I've created, his purpose is absolutely justified, as are his abilities. It's hard for me to prove this without letting you in on intimate details, but I cannot do that for the sake of keeping plot. Let me simply state that:

Yes, he is overpowered. No, most characters would have no chance of defeating him. Yes, I designed him to be that way. Yes, I understand the literary implications of having a God-character.

What you have to understand is that this is a reference sheet, not a be-all-end-all, static interpretation of a character. Things will change and his purpose will not be to sit there and fix a situation conveniently, deus ex machina, when the time is right. He will not break his vow for the convenience of the storyline.

I appreciate you looking over my character! I promise that I'll get to yours soon!
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Wanzer21 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
No problem and I can see most of the points you've given. Styles change and I was just giving my general thoughts on the character.
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Wanzer21 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Alright, I just finished reading this and first off wow is all I have to say at the moment. I'm being dragged off so I'll get review
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NexusYuber Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks for the more in-depth review!
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Onyx-vX Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2011  Student Writer
His Bankai....I can't....i can't fathom how powerful it is XD

I also couln't help but notice the Canon vs Nexus discussion going on, I think it would be an absolutely great battle for ALL of your OC's

Captains:
1. Fire vs Steel
2. Assassination vs Rust
3. Ranged Strikes vs Sheer Force
4. Animal vs Healing
5. Illusion vs Meteor
6. Flying Blades vs Guns
7. Hakuda vs Size
8. Electricity vs Child's Games
9. Blood vs Sound
10. Ice vs Crowd Control
11. Strength vs Power
12. Paralyzation vs Technology
13. Redirection vs Luck

Espadas
0. Size vs Power
1. Cero vs Unpredicability
2. Age vs Sonido
3. Water vs Hierro
4. Darkness vs Assimilation
5. Depair vs Treachury
6. Destruction vs Pestilence
7. Control vs Water
8. Puppetry vs Pesquisa
9. Gluttony vs Duplicity

To me all those fights sound really good and would love to see them.
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NexusYuber Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
He's definitely a powerhouse.

I never really consider how those kinds of fights will play out, but I like the way you listed them by power. I think that personality would play a big part in it, though. For instance, Hitsugaya would annihilate Isamu because he has no emotions and can't be intimidated.
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Onyx-vX Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2011  Student Writer
Exactly, In my opinion, this is how the fights would pkay out...

1.Tsuribakki
2.Tsuriba
3.Okada
4.Unohana
5.Aizen
6.Utsuro
7.Komamura
8.Shunsui
9.Yochi
10.Hitsugaya
11.Seisui
12.Mayuri
13.Niiro

0.Barracuda
1.Starrk
2.Barragan
3.Halibel
4.Ulquiorra
5.Nnoitra
6.Yruzza
7.Carrion
8.Bronnk
9.Vetciia
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iNeyraei Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2011  Student General Artist
I bet some of my OC's would die even by his mere presence. .___.
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NexusYuber Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Pshaw. OC battles aren't good judges of anything, anyway. Power is useless if the character is one-sided and flat. I'd much rather your characters have a decent interaction with the guy instead of fight him! Haha.
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chemical8589 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2011
i wonder which one would win: ur bleach universe or the original bleach universe?
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NexusYuber Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I've really never thought about it, since I consider the two worlds pretty separate. It would probably come down to the actually Bankai abilities of some of the Captains, since Kubo hasn't let them all use them despite the universe nearly coming to an end on a daily basis.
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Rafael-Domination Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Now THIS is a Bleach OC. :D
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NexusYuber Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Why thank you!
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Rafael-Domination Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
You're very welcome! :D

It's been a while since I was impressed by such power and personality. Thanks for making it such a great read. :nod:
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NexusYuber Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I'm glad you enjoyed it. All of my other characters are going to be upgraded to this format and length over the next couple of months.
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